this semester better then last. Which would make sense, as in
theory, I should have learned some things between then and
now. I do have one more story to share from last fall though.
I thought you might like to see what I was working on then.
This story isn't perfect, but it got the most positive feedback
from my teacher and people in my class.
My goal was to weave together a few different people and places
into one story. Make it come full circle. (Which is not as easy to
do in two minutes as you might think.) My teacher had been
pushing us to work on that skill. The focus wasn't on my script
but rather shooting, editing and those transitions in the story.
The pacing is fast. That's another thing I like about it, but
David recently gave me some feedback that he doesn't like the
fast paced editing. He also didn't understand what I was trying
to achieve with my story. Maybe I didn't either. We did a lot
more this semester with writing and sticking to a focus while
putting your story together. Live and learn! Overall, I was
happy with this one.
CLICK HERE TO WATCH IT ON YouTube.
(Because of the way the video is formatted, it doesn't
fully fit on the screen when I post it to blogger.)
I would like to know how a video like this gets 31,654 views and
125 comments. Seriously?